“A Villain Named Angel”
For National Novel Writing Month this year, I’m writing a sequel to the
tale I began last year, a young girl’s quest to prove she’s not a little kid
anymore by joining her grandfather’s group of math and computer geeks seeking
the pure mathematical formula for forgiveness. In the new story, this young
girl (now a teenager) and her friends have to continue her grandpa’s work after
he was killed in a car accident. And they’re looking for something more
mysterious than forgiveness: they’re trying to find the way back from death.
Unlike past years, this time around I had only the scantest idea of the story
before I began to write. That’s okay, because I adore the adventure of a
completely “pantsed” first draft. And it turns out, the most fun so far
involves creating a brand new villain.
He came from nowhere, this villain; I hadn’t set out to find him. I
thought the one from the first book would do just fine. Then, in the middle of
the first week of NaNo, I sat down at a blank computer screen and began to
describe Percival Langston Troy the Third. Yes, he’s the third man in his
family saddled with that name, and in a way, that’s where his villainy begins.
As a youngster, his name prompted other boys to torment him. He decided to
change it. He wanted to call himself “Angel.” As he says: It was still odd,
but I figured I might as well choose the oddity I’d become.
Angel’s determination to craft his own fate leads his father to disown
him in the most humiliating way. It also provides the impetus for his career as
the CEO of a high tech company. From the moment Angel’s father tells the young
boy how “sickened” he is by his choice to discard the family name, Angel begins
to turn into the villain who will turn fear loose in the world.
Where did all this come from? I’ve no idea, really. I didn’t know there
was a physically imposing, fifty-something, treacherously snake-like corporate
CEO lodged in my imagination. But then again, I didn’t know my imagination held
any of the characters in my story until they showed up, sometimes in dreams,
sometimes in reveries, and every once in a while, like Angel Troy, right on the
computer screen. They seem to collect the words I’ll use to describe them,
drawing these words around them like mist swirling around the pine trees on a
cold, clear morning in our upper valley. Angel Troy is big, articulate,
well-dressed, quiet, and entirely fearsome to those around him.
It should be fun to see how he stacks up against the protagonist, a
fifteen year old girl with one quest already under her belt, a three-legged
black Lab at her side, and all the determination born of her love for her
grandpa taken too early from her. Creating these characters means I get to hang
out with villains, heroines, dogs, and a lot more interesting people. At times
like this, writing stories feels like the best job in the world.
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Author bio:
Elizabeth Fountain left a demanding job as a university
administrator in Seattle to move to the small
town of Ellensburg ,
Washington, and pursue her dream of writing novels. Her first book, An Alien’s Guide to World Domination, was released by BURST Books
in 2013; and You, Jane, her second
novel, will be published in 2014. On her breaks from writing, Liz teaches
university courses, gives workshops on writing, spends time with family and
friends, and takes long walks in the diabolical Kittitas Valley
wind. Her quirkily humorous view of humanity is well-suited to tales of aliens
and angels, love and death, friendship and dogs.